Tuesday, July 31, 2007

Uncut Version of Story of a Man

Long time ago in a far away place, there were two men. One man was funny and peaceful. His dad named him Peace so that one day he could go back to his homeland and unite all his people. The second man was kind, generous, and humble. Everyone looked at the second man for leadership and guidance. They became good friends since they were the only Gideonites in the village. Both of them shared common interests and desires, not knowing that they would one day fall in love with the same girl. On a stormy winter night, his friend took him to the land of Gad where he introduced him to his old friend and his old friend's sister. The second man told the first man that this girl is marriage material. The second man loved this girl, since the first time he laid his eyes on her. During this time, the girl had no idea the first man existed. The second man told the first man that her parents were really strict. Every day and night the second man always talked about that girl. The more he talked about the girl, the more his friend started having feelings for that girl. Never realizing in his deepest mind that he began to have a crush on this mysterious girl. Just the thought of it made the first man sick and bitter about himself. From winter, became summer, from summer became winter two years passed by. The first man and second man graduated from the art of warfare. The first man physically and mentally changed dramatically; he wasn't skinny anymore. The second man also changed dramatically; he wasn't fat anymore. After their training, both of them were looking for a job but there was no need for a warrior since there was peace and harmony in the country-side. It was one of the roughest and toughest moments in both of their lives. They studied so hard and yet they had nothing. They had no choice but to pray and put their faith in God. God helped the first man and his family escape from the torn country's civil war, hoping that one day he would come back to help his people out. God did answer his prayer, and he did find work as a warrior and also give the second man a job also as a leader. The only thing he needed now was love. He prayed to God for love, never knowing that one day God did answer his prayer again. Unexpectedly, out of nowhere, he was invited to a formal dance. The first man was appalled that he found the girl that his friend liked. The girl acknowledged that the man existed. He asked the girl to dance- knowing what he did was wrong, but he still did it. They danced for a long time, and he knew that from that point on, the man had betrayed his friend but he felt that holding onto the girl felt so good. He didn't know if he could let her go or not because it felt so passionate. He never told his friend what really happened, until one day his friend found out. He kept telling his friend that there was nothing going on, but there was something going on. He had been writing her a letter everyday. The man had betrayed his friend and his moral value. Everyday he's questioning himself? One day, the second man told the first man that he was madly in love with the girl. The first man couldn't take it anymore and thought to himself, how could he betray his moral values and beliefs because friendship is so important to him. Even more important than the girl. He decided to tell the truth; his friend was shocked but forgave him because of his honesty. The second friend gave up the girl for his friend knowing that the girl loved the first man more and promised his friend that he would support him a 100 percent. For awhile everything seemed to be going good, until the girl sent a letter to the second man telling God did not create the first man for her. The first man was so frustrated and depressed. His heart grows colder and colder. He wanted to let out his warrior spirit by taking revenge. How could he find a way take to revenge?? The girl is so evil, after all he the things he did for her.

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